Argumentative Essay Task #1 "West culture give bad habits to the young people in indonesia"

Essay#1 

 

West culture give bad habits to the young people in indonesia

    Nowadays, Indonesia is surprised by newsensation of youth’s habits. It can be known from their custom, tradition, language, appearance and their daily lifestyle. The daily lifestyle that day often call it modern trend.  We do not know exactly their habits from their own mind or not, but several of them because of the influence of west culture which is coming to Indonesia. Although some people think that west culture give bad habit to young people in Indonesia, there are good effect of west culture.

The influence of west culture give bad habits to the young people who are crowded and inclined to the life in the big city but also to the young people which is coming to Indonesia. Who are from crowded in the village. The influence of west culture to the young people is not only negative effect but also positive effects such as; language and so on. We have know well that several  student in Indonesia study in other language.

   Indonesia is surprised by new sensation of youth’s habits.  It can be known from their custom, tradition, language and their lifestyle. We doo not know exactly their habits from their own mind or not, because the influence of west culture which is coming to Indonesia. Commonly the young people just want to express their style by cheating their idol, even they have to spend much money to do it.

Talking about the influence of west culture.  We can divide to be two sides; the first side is positive effects. It is about language. The second side is negative effects . it is more dominant than positive effects. Wecan see in their appearance cheating their idol from west cuture or another way to see the negative effects.

  We are as young generation we must able to filter which one the best one and which one worst one from west culture, so that our original culture is not lost from our beloved country. We can not blame their habits change because that is all their habitually. The young people just want to express their style by cheating their idol, even they have to spend much money to do it and then we can not blame their habits that can express their respond.